EMAIL<\/a> | SYLLABUS<\/a> | POLICIES<\/a> | QUESTIONS<\/a> | PRESENTATIONS<\/a> | JOURNALS<\/a> | PAPER<\/a> | FINAL<\/a><\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n Due Dates. <\/strong>The final draft will be due as specified at the bottom of the syllabus page. I require emailed attachments in MS Word (or inline only if necessary) because it\u2019s easier to comment on drafts and maintain records. A one-paragraph topic\/argument description will be due by email on the date the syllabus page specifies. See the syllabus for the paper requirement\u2019s value as a percentage of the course grade.<\/p>\n\n\n\n General Prompt<\/u>.<\/strong> \u201cChoose one or two assigned texts and, focusing on issues you find relevant and manageable, write a 5-7 page essay specific in its initial thesis, easy to follow in structure, and clear and consistent in style.\u201c<\/p>\n\n\n\n Developing a Topic<\/strong>. You may want to develop a paper topic by refining or adapting one of the study questions on our authors. If so, send me the question or questions that interest you, and I will gladly help you spin out a good topic. <\/p>\n\n\n\n Formatting.<\/strong> Follow MLA (Modern Language Association) style. This means, mainly, that you must observe the following formatting rules:<\/p>\n\n\n\n 1. Observe 1-inch margins (MS Word uses 1 1\/2\u201c; change with Word\u2019s file menu Page Setup feature).<\/p>\n\n\n\n 2. Double-space text and indented quotations alike. That is, don\u2019t single-space quotations.<\/p>\n\n\n\n 3. Avoid extra paragraphing spaces or extra spaces anywhere (after title, etc.). Therefore, tab-indent the first line of regular paragraphs 1\/2 inch rather than block-styling them, which would require extra spaces.<\/p>\n\n\n\n 4. Indent long quotations of more than four lines from the left; there\u2019s no need to indent from the right.<\/p>\n\n\n\n 5. Number your essay\u2019s pages in header at top right: use Word\u2019s insert menu Page Numbers feature to do that. Then input your last name with Word\u2019s view menu \u201cheader and footer\u201c feature. The command \u201ccontrol\/letter r\u201c will right-justify the header text you type.<\/p>\n\n\n\n 6. Include at top left on separate double-spaced lines your name, the instructor\u2019s name, bare course title, and date. Then add your centered title. A typical paper would begin like this:<\/p>\n\n\n\n Simpson 1<\/p>\n\n\n\n Bart Simpson<\/p>\n\n\n\n Professor Montgomery Burns<\/p>\n\n\n\n English 101<\/p>\n\n\n\n 25 December 2010<\/p>\n\n\n\n Why Should I Study English if I\u2019m Never Going to England?<\/p>\n\n\n\n 7. Introduce and cite sources properly within your essay, in accordance with the MLA Handbook.<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n 8. Offer a \u201cworks cited\u201c list on the last page of your document even if an anthology is your only text. Again, for the relevant conventions, refer to a book every humanities major should have: The MLA Handbook for Writers of Research Papers.<\/em> 7th. edition. New York: MLA, 2009. ISBN-13: 978-1603290241.<\/p>\n\n\n\n Rough Drafts (Optional).<\/strong> If you give me a rough draft or some portion of one, I will read it carefully and offer substantive comments. I will not simply \u201cfix\u201c rough drafts since that discourages students from doing their own editing. Self-expression and the desire to say something important are good reasons to write, but they alone do not make a person a good writer. That takes time and respect for the medium itself, including its formal conventions.<\/p>\n\n\n\n Research and \u201cWorks Cited\u201c<\/strong> For undergraduates, research is optional. The main thing is to attend closely to the assigned texts. If you like to do outside reading and work with theoretical approaches, that’s good, but this assignment is not technically a research paper. Even if you don’t incorporate outside research, you still need to include a separate Works Cited page at the end of the essay. That is because you will, of course, be citing at least one of the assigned texts. Use MLA guidelines for citing sources. As for graduates, your longer paper should incorporate at least some secondary material, but I leave the relative balance between primary and secondary material to your discretion.<\/p>\n\n\n\n Your essay doesn\u2019t need to offer exhaustive commentary about the work or author chosen, and it doesn\u2019t need to provide huge amounts of background information about history, the author\u2019s life, and so forth. Instead, examine your text\/s on the specific things (problems, issues, themes, etc.) you want to write about, and be willing to grapple directly and in some detail with the actual language of your chosen work. Try to write a paper that leads your readers towards genuine insights based on a patient, well-structured analysis of particular passages (and flexible points of comparison, for comparative essays). If your essay makes a reader feel like re-reading all or some of the literary work in question, you will have done your job well.<\/p>\n\n\n\n The paper should go well beyond summarizing, though a little summarizing may be necessary as context for quotations and (in your first paragraph) just to explain what kind of story you are dealing with. The last several sentences of your first paragraph should explain what specific, manageable section of the text you will write about and why you are going to write about it. The \u201cwhy\u201c part should be more specific than \u201cI want to explore certain characters\u2019 actions and relationships, and later on I\u2019ll tell you what the point of doing that was.\u201c Your reader wants to know what you have already discovered and what you will, therefore, be explaining in detail later. That\u2019s deductive structure, as illustrated in the sample paper: here’s my argument \/ now I\u2019m citing and analyzing key passages to show how I arrived at it \/ now I\u2019m wrapping up the argument and reflecting on it.<\/p>\n\n\n\n Thesis Development. In the drafting stages of a deductive essay, the thesis in the first paragraph is often vague, more like a general topic than a specific argument. In a deductive essay, one states claims at the outset and then explores them; however, insights tend to develop inductively. That is, what the writer wants to say emerges only gradually, and becomes sharpest towards the end of the paper. The most efficient way to sharpen your first paragraph is to look over what you write in the middle and conclusion of your essay, and tie it all together into a few sentences that will serve as your thesis. That way, you can turn an inductive rough draft into a deductive final draft, and avoid allowing initially vague claims to get the better of you: unless handled with care, ideas quickly become traps.<\/p>\n\n\n\n Avoiding Generalities. Do not begin your first paragraph with filler such as, \u201cThroughout history, people have fallen in love and written poetry.\u201c That is an irrecoverable sign that the writer has little of substance to say. Also avoid appreciation-filler such as \u201cBen Jonson\u2019s plays are immortal.\u201c<\/p>\n\n\n\n The aim here is to offer sustained analysis of substantive quotations for which you have provided adequate context, and a conclusion that develops logically from the middle section without simply repeating your thesis. Ideally, there should not be only extremely brief quotations; showcasing a few longer passages and staying with them improves emphasis and structure. In a comparative paper, it\u2019s usually best to deal with the texts in two solid blocks rather than to go back and forth between them several times.<\/p>\n\n\n\n Grammar and style. Key things are consistent verb tense use (present tense is usually best), active voice, and straightforward (not wordy or contorted) sentence structure. A Works Cited page should be included even if you only cite the assigned text\/s, and MLA quotation formatting should be correct: see the sample paper available in Writing Guides. Failure to proofread and edit carefully in the final stages is a major factor in poor grades.<\/p>\n\n\n\n More thoughts on style. Avoid vague introductory language or empty praise of the author in question. A statement like \u201cThroughout history so-and-so has been considered a great author\u201c is padding. Get rid of sentences that function only as warm-up for specific analysis, somewhat like filler. Read your paper out loud, and you will get rid of many filler phrases and awkward constructions. We make mistakes in everyday speech, but at least we don’t say things like \u201cobjective consideration of contemporary phenomena necessitates the inevitable conclusion that success or failure in competitive activities exhibits no tendency to be commensurate with innate capacity.\u201c<\/p>\n\n\n\n If you earn a B+, an A-, or an A, that’s great. The A range grades mean that I really didn\u2019t see major problems in your thesis, your handling of quotations and organization of the essay, or your grammar and style. I found your paper sophisticated and well written. If you earn a B+ or A-, that generally means your thesis was good but that the grammar and style issues kept the paper from being an outright \u201cA.\u201c I have marked up a few pages of your essay to indicate any problems with grammar and style, and possibly with minor thesis\/content issues if I found any.<\/p>\n\n\n\n If you get a B, that’s good, too. A \u201cB\u201c is solid work, with some room for improvement both in terms of content (i.e. thesis presentation and inclusion\/handling of quotations), and style\/grammar. The paper markup should indicate some areas in need of work.<\/p>\n\n\n\n If you earn a B- or C+, that\u2019s no catastrophe, but you can do better. Invariably this range of grades means that grammar\/style problems slowed me down when I was reading your paper, even if they didn\u2019t keep me from understanding the basic argument. Often additional problems were that the thesis remained somewhat general and that the paper didn\u2019t make its case mainly through analysis of specific quotations.<\/p>\n\n\n\n If you do not get at least a C, the grade means that I saw some serious problems with both content\/organization and with grammar\/style, or that you simply didn’t meet the requirements for the paper, i.e. you turned in a one-pager with no textual analysis, or some such thing.<\/p>\n\n\n\n An F grade usually stems from plagiarized content, whether in part or in entirety, which is also grounds for failure in the course. Sources must always be documented.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":" ESSAY INSTRUCTIONS FOR ENGLISH 317 MILTONCSU FULLERTON, SPRING 2013 PROMPTS AND INSTRUCTIONS FOR THE TERM PAPER Due Dates. The final draft will be due as specified at the bottom of the syllabus page. 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Advance Draft Comments<\/h2>\n\n\n\n
1. Thesis presentation in your first paragraph<\/h2>\n\n\n\n
2. Argument structure and handling of quotations<\/h2>\n\n\n\n
3. Grammar and style<\/h2>\n\n\n\n
GRADES FOR THE FINAL DRAFT<\/h2>\n\n\n\n